Thesis and Topic Sentence
Posted May 12, 2008 
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Comments(2) | TS: Global Warming affects us all and therefore each individual must become active in order for a global change to occur.
Thesis: Global Warming is a current issue which encompasses the entire world, thus the entire world should know the facts.
I like the first one, because it gets at one of the three fundamental criteria for the unit: Taking social action. To take action means we will be inspired by knowing the facts you share. Nice!
Thank you. We have to work on the thesis a little bit but I am hoping some other group will have an even better one because I do not like ours.